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采用考官推荐的全新的批改方式

系统会自动把你的作文copy四份,外教将会在第一份作文中仅对achievement进行检查和评估,第二份作文仅对coherence and cohesion进行检查和评估,第三和第四份分别是词汇和语法。相对于传统的批改方式,这种方式具有3个明显的优势:

更深刻理解自己的问题

“这种批改方式让我更加清晰的知道自己的问题在哪里,这也让我消化反馈的过程变得很轻松,而不是之前无从下手的感觉。”

更好的理解评分标准

“这让我对雅思写作的四个评分标准的理解更加清楚和深刻”

更利于学生的提高

“这更利于我对自己的问题进行针对性的提高。把所有的批改都集中在一份作文中的方式,密密麻麻的批改痕迹让我很难明白怎样具体的进行提高。”

严控批改质量

30余项检查条目,你需要的不只是改改单词和语法

Task response

Does the student have a clear position (i.e. give a clear answer to the question)?

Check if all questions are answered

Check if the number of words in 2 or 3 body paragraphs is approximate

Is the topic sentence effective, meaningful and relevant?

Does every question fully develop?

Whether the explanation is sufficient and reasonable?

Just repeating ideas without effective explanations and extensions?

Is the example reasonable and make sense?

Does the example support the topic sentence well?

Is every sentence on topic? Check if there are any vocabulary or sentences that off the topic

Coherence and Cohesion

Is there a clear central topic in each paragraph?

Find out all the conjunctions and pronouns in the text, and check whether they are used reasonably and correctly.

Is there a sense of overall organization and progression? How about progression within each main paragraph?

Whether the logic between sentences is smooth and accurate and whether there are logical errors, unclear logical progression and other issues?

Is there a clear central topic in each paragraph?

Find out all the conjunctions and pronouns in the text, and check whether they are used reasonably and correctly.

Is there a sense of overall organization and progression? How about progression within each main paragraph?

Lexical Resource

Is every word used correctly and appropriately?

Check if enough topic words are used

Check the text and find out words that students repeat many times but can easily be replaced.

Is there a clear central topic in each paragraph?

Find out all the conjunctions and pronouns in the text, and check whether they are used reasonably and correctly.

Is there a sense of overall organization and progression? How about progression within each main paragraph?

Grammar

Go through the essay sentence by sentence and find out all the free-error sentences

Go through the essay sentence by sentence and find out all the easy-to-avoid grammatical errors. Such as: articles, singular and plural, spelling mistakes, case, possessive, third person singular, etc.

Go through the essay sentence by sentence and find out all the general grammatical errors.

Find out words or sentences that are syntactically correct but can be improved.

Is there a clear central topic in each paragraph?

Is there a clear central topic in each paragraph?

专业负责的外教

不是随便一个母语者都可以做好雅思作文批改

硕士学位,除了有过3年批改雅思作文的经历外,还拥有9年的文字编辑和校对工作经验,为全球许多著名的出版商工作过,包括剑桥大学出版社、牛津大学出版社、斯普林格出版社等。文字功底扎实,热情且负责的对待每一篇作文,深受学生的喜爱。

Garima. S
Adelaide, Australia

I have been correcting IELTS writings for last 3 years. Be aware of the standards required for evaluating IELTS essays, reports and letters.

学生们的评价

外教的批改很仔细用心,指出了我不少的错误,尤其是逻辑方面,给了我很多有用的反馈。—Chris Cheng

虽然比一般的批改贵一些,但是很值得,一分钱一分货。不管是批改的质量还是对我的实际帮助都超出了我的预期。已经安利给了几个同学。
—Andrew

特具一格的批改方式真的很棒,外教也很专业,比绝大部分的批改都靠谱,希望你们继续保持下去。
—Yang Zi

批改的很详细,比我在机构的外教批改的好的多。最让我惊喜的是,竟然有针对错误的练习题,可以说很用心了。
—Kathryn

FAQ

改一篇多少钱?大小作文都是一样的吗?

大小作文都是一样的,都是100元/篇,现在是活动期间每一篇仅售69元/篇,活动结束马上恢复原价。

微信公众号是多少?

改一篇多少钱?大小作文都是一样的吗?

大小作文都是一样的,都是100元/篇,现在是活动期间每一篇仅售69元/篇,活动结束马上恢复原价。

批改的价格有优惠吗?

平时会有优惠活动,详情请添加微信公众号在后台回复“优惠码”。

如果题库里没有我要写的题目怎么办?

我们建议只对官方的题目进行练习。如果你的题目来自官方,但是题库里没有,请添加微信公众号在后台发送你要写的题目,等待几分钟刷新提交作文的页面即可选择你添加的题目编号。

上传的方式是什么样的?

有两种不同的方式。
1.如果你的作文是纸质文档,可以选择上传你的纸质文档的照片(小于4M)。
2.如果你的作文是电子文档或者你是选择机考,可以选择直接将文字type在文字框里。

同一篇作文的复改还需要收费吗?

不收费。每一篇作文都可以免费进行第二次批改。

批改的流程是什么样的?

注册账号-购买篇数-进入题库选择写作的题目-上传作文,并选择题目编号-提交-等待12-24个小时-查收批改好的作文-进行习题练习-重写这篇作文-再次上传并提交-等待12个小时左右-查收-结束。

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